So... You have Garageband and can put the preset loops on the playlist. BFD.
It depresses me, but at the same time, inspires me and makes me feel happy in a weird way, if that makes any sense.
It sounds more like heavily copied almost note for note!
Honestly, how could this not be getting above a 4?
You have potential. You sound like that band Game Over (google them.)
Honestly. This deserves more than what it's getting right now. A LOT more.
This could even be OCRemix level if you worked it over a bit more and cut a few parts. Just fix the looping parts, (I counted quite a few) and you're golden.
And I'm not a N00b trying to sound smart or anything. I actually had another few accounts that did somewhat decent, and I DO know how to judge music.
Dont' worry about ocremix.
If people like Injury can get good reviews there, anyone can.
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